edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Years have passed, and I am grown up now and have become a spaceship pilot as I had been dreaming of when I was a child. I live on a military base and work on a rotating shift schedule as a member of the border squadron. I am also a flight instructor for freshmen at the space academy in my free time. My squadron's responsibility is protecting the boundaries of a solar system that my parents live in one of its twelve planets.

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Today, while I am teaching at the academy, the red alert suddenly turns on, and the commanding officer announces that one of our planets in the solar system is under attack. A family (the primitives' family) has attacked my parent's planet suddenly with a vast number of robots, necromancers, genetically hybrid species, and gigantic animals by their outdated aircrafts. Unfortunately, when our squadron arrives there, there is no longer any sign of my parent's home and their neighbors. And we find none of them alive there. Although our squadron defeats the enemy and drive them back, the damages are horrendous.

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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: The Council of our solar system convenes immediately and puts all the planets on red-alert until further notice. Many days have passed from the time of the war ends, and life has come back to normal nowadays, but I am tremendously sad and wondering if there is any solution for ending bloodshed and plundering forever in here?

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I am praying days and nights to God asking him for his guidance. It passes a few days; I am on fasting in my residence in the military base until one night that my friend, also my superior officer, comes to my barracks, and finds me fainted on the bed. He immediately calls the medics, and they take me to the military hospital. After a few days of treatments, I get my conscious back, but I am not the same young John as I was before. I have transformed to a holy man, paladin, and even my appearances have altered to an older man. I ask my superior officer immediately to take me to the council, whose session is in progress at the same time. My friend does not understand the reason behind my request. And while he pretends that is complying with my demand takes me to the headquarters instead of the council. And then states my story to our superiors. I talk there with a tone that sounds like a song, but it is so loud that it got heard from a far distance.

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I say, "The only solution to end this vulgarity and savagery is to send an ultimatum to the attacker family indicating that we want them to limit their procreation, or they should expect us to target their incubator factories." Although the enemy do not intend to change their attitude against other families (races), they instantly limit their procreation and stop attacking our family, when they receive the ultimatum. Martyrs get rewarded, and offenders are punished by gods always, although everyone does not perceive it vividly. But this is the universal law, and God's commandments surround everybody everywhere, whether we comprehend them entirely or not.

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: The other races (families); those who are good in social affairs and entertainment and sports, and the other one, for whom environment-friendly industries is their specialty, are plundered continuously by the primitive family over and over again. As I said, I am not the same John as I was before. Although no family has asked me for my help, I feel great responsibility for the wellbeing and prosperity of the other families. But, helping them is neither within the range of my duties and not according to my job description.

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: One day, I ask my superior for a long leave of duty. "I'm going to go to those two families and help them resist the primitive family." My superior says, "You are out of your mind or think that you are a prophet or a commander in this world." Gabriel appears to me at the same time and says, "Tell him that you are a prophet, and this is your mission as God has commanded." My superior officer replies, "The head of our council is the god of our universe." And asks me, "To whom are you referring to as the god?" My only concern was my own family (race) before. After meeting Gabriel, now as a prophet, I feel a great responsibility for those two other families that are under constant looting and extortion of the primitive family.

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I answer to my superior officer, "First, the god of this world is not the head of our family council, and Solomon the Great is the god of this world who is submissive and servant of the Almighty God. And second, I am offering you an excellent opportunity to meet the god of the second universe, Solomon the Great. May his mercy be upon us." My superior says, "Do you know that your request for an extended period of leave is virtually impossible in the army unless they find you mentally incapable of serving your duties." I answer, "Ironically, I am in perfect health mentally and physically. And I am not going to pretend to be someone who is mentally disturbed." "My superior says, okay, then if you leave the army without having the legitimate documents of leave, that is considered expulsion or even act of treason. And the council might stripe your citizenship while none of your family members can back you up. And then any member of other families can capture you and make you their slave, even those that you are eager to help them." I say passionately, "I appreciate your consideration and friendship, but I have my orders from God whom, who is much far more superior to our army, and the council." And I continue, "Listen to me, this is an opportunity that happens once in your lifetime. Come with me and meet the great Solomon, the god of the second universe and find out the truth yourself." My superior is tired of convincing me, and finds me confident as solid as a rock, he asks me with scepticism, "Where is His Highness, and how long does it take we get there and meet him?" By the power that Gabriel has entrusted in me, I answer with confidence, "Within seconds." My superior (Ken - my friend) says with humour, "For a few seconds, my answer is yes."

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: My superior is tired of convincing me, and finds me confident as solid as a rock, he asks me with scepticism, "Where is His Highness, and how long does it take we get there and meet him?" By the power that Gabriel has entrusted in me, I answer with confidence, "Within seconds."

edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: As soon as Ken consents to my plan, a tremendous gust blows and sweeps us away, and after a few seconds we land on a vast pasture in the central planet of the second universe. There is nobody there, but we hear soft symphonic music from a distance. Ken is not aware of what is happening here but gradually gets to his senses. And he suddenly asks where we are and from where the soulful melody is being played. We see a vague shadow of a rocky mountain from a distance. And we start walking toward that mountain spontaneously. As we get closer toward the mountain, the picture of a large cave gets clearer. We start walking faster and faster. We can see a large cave guarded by many armed warriors resembling Cyrus's army. They have a long curly beard, and are dressed in long corrugated robes and trousers. They carry a kind of weapon that looks like a dagger-ax, but it is not the same. Immediately after arriving at the cave entrance, a guard comes forward, and she guides us to a chariot carried by two huge bears.