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10 turns Nov 24, 2023 at 5:28 PM UTC Iran , Tehran
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I ask cautiously? "What kind of missions is it?" Gabriel answers, "There are different tasks, but generally speaking, you have to appear as a hero to take people from despair back to optimism and buoyancy in happiness and hope." I say, "As a superman?" Gabriel says, "Something like that." I spontaneously say, "Oh, I like that. But what do I have to say to Carol?" And Then I answer myself, "No, that doesn't have anything to do with my life on Earth." Gabriel smiles when he knows that I am thinking loudly and says, "Farewell for now, and I will soon let you know about the mission and when to start."
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I asked cautiously, "What kind of missions are we talking about here?" Gabriel responded, his voice filled with an air of mystery, "There are various tasks, but essentially, your role would be to embody a hero, bringing those drowning in despair back to the surface of optimism, happiness, and hope." "Like a superman?" I asked, my curiosity piqued. Gabriel nodded, a subtle smile touching his lips. "Something along those lines." Spontaneously, I exclaimed, "Oh, I'm drawn to that idea! But what about Carol?" Then, I reasoned with myself, "No, that has nothing to do with my life on Earth." Gabriel's smile widened as he sensed my inner thoughts, and he bid his farewell. "Until next time, keep your mind open. I will inform you soon about the mission details and when it is time to commence."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: I come home happily and when Carol asks me, "What pleasant surprise brought you home early?" I respond immediately, "today is our anniversary," and I give her a beautiful hand-carved silver medallion that I purchased it on the way back home from Cheyenne's shop. That was the best answer that I could come up with against Carol's curiosity, which, of course, the date of our anniversary was not right, but I couldn't find any better alibi. Carol's IQ is above average; she knows that there is something that I am not willing to talk about, since she trusts me, she hugs me instead and thinks this is sufficient for now.
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When I arrived home with a smile on my face, Carol couldn't help but question, "What pleasant surprise has brought you home early?" Without missing a beat, I answered swiftly, excitement evident in my voice, "It's our anniversary today," as I proudly presented her with a delicate hand-carved silver medallion that caught my eye during a visit to Cheyenne's shop on my way back. Though I knew deep down that our anniversary wasn't actually on this date, it was the best alibi I could conjure up against Carol's inquisitive nature. Her above-average intelligence told her that there was something I wasn't willing to share, but her trust in me prevailed. Rather than pressing for more information, she pulled me into a warm embrace, silently acknowledging that for now, this display of affection would suffice.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: She was thinking of buying me a present next week, which is the actual date of our anniversary, and now that I bought her a week earlier, she is not going to embarrass me. "I have a piece of good news for you, too; your grandfather and parents are coming here next weekend," says Carol. Now, my happiness becomes double, and I say, "I have to take you out for dinner." And then I hug her, and we both laugh.
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She had been planning to surprise me with a gift next week, on our actual anniversary. However, now that I had managed to get her a week in advance, she wouldn't have to feel awkward or caught off guard. "There's something else I have to share with you," Carol exclaimed. "Your grandfather and parents are coming to visit us next weekend." My happiness instantly multiplied at this unexpected news. "I must take you out for a celebratory dinner," I declared, unable to contain my excitement. Without hesitation, I pulled her close, enveloping her in a warm embrace, and we both laughed, sharing in the bliss of the moment.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Today's morning, everyone is happy and going up and down in the house, preparing the food and dusting the furniture, tidying the rooms. Generally, we are all happy to receive our dearest guests. My father and Carol's father are old pals from the time they used to serve in the same division in the US Navy. And my grandfather is dear and respected by everyone in the family and even amongst the neighbours and friends. Carol believes that what really made these families come together that led to our marriage were our mothers. They wanted to keep their friendship steady while they were both studying at the same university in Michigan. All of a sudden, one of the helps shouts; the guests are coming.
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This morning, a cheerful buzz filled the air as everyone in the house bustled about, preparing food, dusting furniture, and tidying up the rooms. Anticipation radiated through the halls, for today, we were eagerly awaiting the arrival of our beloved guests. My father and Carol's father had been lifelong buddies ever since their days in the same division of the US Navy. As for my grandfather, he commanded utmost respect from our entire family, as well as our neighbors and friends. Carol often recounted how it was our mothers who played a significant role in bringing our families together, their friendship blossoming during their time at university in Michigan. Suddenly, the voice of one of the household staff members echoed through the house, "The guests are arriving!" As the shouts resonated, we hurried to welcome our honored guests, feeling the warmth of anticipation and excitement amplify with each passing moment.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Grandfather is driving a brand-new space car; he looks fifty years younger after the new lung transplant. He comes out of the car with my parents and a middle-aged lady friend. Grandpa looks healthy and sharp. We all on the farm are surprised. None of us could imagine that Grandpa had a young girlfriend. Carol and I are the first ones who go forward and hug Grandfather and welcome my parents and the lady guest. And then Carol's parents and the rest do the same. I am going to ask the grandpa at the earliest opportunity about his lady friend. Grandpa reads my mind and whispers in my ear quickly in a low voice, "It isn't as you think." I am more curious than before and looking for an opportunity to find out what is going on between Grandpa and his lady companion. Grandpa whispers again, "She is a messenger and comes from the underworld."
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Grandfather stepped out of his brand-new space car, appearing as if he had shed fifty years with his recent lung transplant. His vitality was remarkable, his demeanor exuding a new-found vigor. Accompanying him were my parents and a middle-aged woman who seemed to be in the company of our formidable patriarch. Stunned, we all stood on the farm, our expressions a mix of surprise and curiosity. None of us could have fathomed that Grandpa had a lady friend, let alone one who appeared to be much younger. Carol and I were the first to step forward, embracing Grandfather warmly and extending a warm welcome to my parents and their unexpected companion. Soon, Carol's parents and the rest of our kin followed suit, exchanging greetings and expressions of delight. Eager to unravel the mystery surrounding Grandpa's new companion, I resolved to seize the earliest opportunity to inquire about her. Sensing my curiosity, Grandpa leaned in, his voice a hushed whisper against my ear, "It's not what you think." My curiosity grew even more intense, and I found myself eagerly searching for any chance to uncover the truth behind the connection between Grandpa and his enigmatic lady companion. Once again, Grandpa whispered, his words barely audible, "She is a messenger, hailing from the underworld."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Carol is serving coffee and tea for everyone, while is checking on the new guest. I notice that the environment is full of curiosity, and so I suddenly ask Grandpa when I can get her resume and teaching background. Grandpa immediately grasps the clue and says, "Well, she has brought it with her and plans to give it to you later." And he continues, "You might be better off doing the first interview," Through the dialogue exchanged between us, I notice that everybody who is listening is getting calmer. And they put away their suspicion or wild guess about the grandpa, who has brought a stranger to the house. The ice is melting. Then Carol asks the lady, "Are you looking for a job in Montana?" The smart lady answers, "Well, I don't know yet, it depends on how I can go on here." Grandpa goes on, "Sorry, I didn't introduce Anna at first. She is my neighbour's neighbour. And I wanted to get her out of the family dispute. We may be able to help her find a job as an elementary school teacher here, and change her life."
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As Carol skillfully served coffee and tea to everyone, she discreetly kept an eye on our new guest. Sensing the air charged with curiosity, I seized the moment and turned to Grandpa, posing a direct question about acquiring her resume and teaching background. Grandpa, quick to understand my subtle prompt, replied, "She has actually brought it with her. She intends to provide it to you later. It might be best if you conduct the initial interview." Through our exchange, I observed a wave of relief wash over those who had been listening intently. Their suspicions and wild conjectures regarding Grandpa's unanticipated visitor began to dissipate. The tension melted away, creating an atmosphere of acceptance and intrigue. Taking the lead in conversation, Carol inquired of the lady, "Are you seeking employment in Montana?" The lady, astute and composed, replied, "I am not entirely certain yet. It depends on how things unfold here." Grandpa interjected, a touch of regret in his voice, "I apologize for not introducing Anna earlier. She is a neighbor of our neighbor. I thought it best to remove her from a family dispute. We may have an opportunity to assist her in securing a position as an elementary school teacher in our community--a chance to transform her life."
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Now carol's mother comes forward to help Anna kindly and says, "There is nothing to worry about, and I do my best to help you settle down around here." Then the dinner is being served in the basement on the long oak table on the same evening, and we talk about Anna and our best wishes for her, until late hours at night. Later, Carol and I say goodnight to everybody, and with Patrick, we go to our place on the right-wing of the main house. While we are in bed, Carol asks me if I will stay home with the family tomorrow. I answer, "I've got to go to the office tomorrow early morning for a few hours, but will come back home shortly." Carol does not insist since she knows me and my responsibilities at work, then she only asks me to buy some coffee on the way back home. But there is no answer from me. At the same time, Gabriel appears and says, "Well, it's time to go." And suddenly, I find myself in a place like a rotten, old, filthy hostel behind a bench. It is like returning to the antiquity of life on earth.
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Carol's mother stepped forward, extending her kindness to Anna. Her words reassured the newcomer, "There is no need to worry. I will do everything I can to help you settle in and feel at ease here." As the evening progressed, dinner was served in the basement, the long oak table ready to accommodate our gathering. We spoke of Anna, sharing our best wishes for her, our conversations stretching into the late hours of the night. Eventually, Carol and I bid goodnight to everyone. With Patrick in tow, we made our way to our designated quarters on the right-wing of the main house. Settling into bed, Carol inquired if I would be staying home with the family the following day. I replied, "I need to go to the office early in the morning for a few hours, but I'll be back home shortly." Carol, understanding my work responsibilities, didn't press further. Instead, she simply requested that I buy some coffee on my way back home. However, no answer came from me. In that very moment, Gabriel materialized, his presence and voice breaking through. "Well, it's time to go," he declared. Suddenly, reality shifted, and I found myself in a decrepit, dilapidated hostel, its deterioration reminiscent of a bygone era, an echo of ancient life on Earth.
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edit and improve the style of the excerpts from my sci-fi fantasy novel: Carol asks me again and again and then tries to shake me up a bit. There is no response. Now she is frightened and calls her parents and 911 for help. The officer on the other end of the line asks her, what has happened? Carol replies about my condition while she is breathing with difficulty and crying hard at the same time. The lady officer tries to calm her down and says that the paramedics are going to be there in less than 10 minutes. Later, I (my body) am in the Missoula Hospital Emergency Room. The doctors and the staff of Emergency Room (ER) are working on me to bring me back to life while Carol and her family are watching anxiously behind the glass screen.