C0 Filter It only amounted to one, and it would always be one and never two --and t 81 conv. C1 Ryan hauled his torso through the splinters of glass, blood saturating his shirt 33 conv. C2 As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , draining t 32 conv. C3 How about this : Lara felt the agony crescendo through her tightening abdomen , 23 conv. C4 Is this written at an advanced level: "Ah Ryan, you're a handsome bastard for su 20 conv. C5 Here's a scene based on a prompt to put my character in a graveyard in the snow: 19 conv. C6 "Ah Ryan, you're a good-lookin' bastard , from the collarbone up, that is. But f 16 conv. C7 Is this better? Maybe it amounted to nothing-after hours of rotting in the dayli 15 conv. C8 "Liam's hair, laden with splinters of ice and snow, stuck out from his low-slung 15 conv. C9 Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet came to a nullification of movement as 14 conv. C10 Is this an idealised portrayal: But you said mine is too idealised ok, what if i 14 conv. C11 Holding her closer to his pulse, Max stood against the metallic wall of the NICU 14 conv. C12 Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm, smiled against the warm twilight rays 14 conv. C13 Carter crashed to his knees , the gold flecks in his red-raw eyes lighting with 11 conv. C14 She was standing by the waterfront, the hospital safely in the background as she 11 conv. C15 Here's the passage with the additional text broken into paragraphs: "That's it, 11 conv. C16 His gaze wandered from his shaking hands and out onto horizon, trailing the star 8 conv. C17 How is this piece of writing : As he opened his eyes , his pulse was in his thro 8 conv. C18 As Ryan pushed his thighs through the rubble, honing in on the sound of human te 8 conv. C19 What about this piece : It only amounted to one, and it would always , in his ch 8 conv. C20 Has the author achieved something challenging? Victor glanced out across the fie 8 conv. C21 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 7 conv. C22 As Carter grasped her wrist, his fingers locating her pulse point as his binds w 6 conv. C23 With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that cap 6 conv. C24 Sweat crawled in slivering, unwholesome trails of vessel-breaking tears, bathing 6 conv. C25 Are Ryan and Liam distinct : Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's arm firmly, s 6 conv. C26 The sub-zero teeth pierced his flesh as the flare of saline bled through his por 5 conv. C27 Maybe it was the lack of heat on his skin, after hours of drowning in the sunlig 5 conv. C28 due to Elara's pregnancy being smooth sailing and healthy, if not deeply sensual 5 conv. C29 Protector : Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet came to a nullification of 5 conv. C30 Holding her closer to his pulse, Max stood against the metallic wall of the NICU 5 conv. C31 Liam collapsed into the unforgiving embrace of the concrete, his ravaged body we 5 conv. C32 As he approached , her ears flattened against her head, her sable fur absent in × 4 conv. C33 Is this a realistic piece? Mason sighed in frustration, balling another pair of 4 conv. C34 Elara's fingers grazed the warm skin below Max's wrist as she searched for his a 4 conv. C35 Is this overwrought: The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital co 4 conv. C36 Does this have a sense of gritty realism ? "Ah Ryan, you're handsome sure, from 4 conv. C37 Please break down how Ryan preserves Liam's dignity and helps him : Filter It on 3 conv. C38 Hey, where's your mom and dad , huh? " Ryan asked, the girl's tiny amber irises 3 conv. C39 His aching skull, enraged with the pulse of rising nausea, slumped against the s 3 conv. C40 "I didn't want to turn four! I'm sorry!" , he pled as he wiped his nostrils agai 3 conv. C41 Are Liam and Ryan's voices distinct Listening as terror flooded the membranes be 3 conv. C42 The roads were dead, lifeless , without a pulse as Ryan watched Liam's broken fi 3 conv. C43 Is this well worded As the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt 3 conv. C44 Please highlight effective descriptions and dialogue: "The sight of his crumpled 3 conv. C45 Her eyes were deflecting the neon light as she penetrated his gaze, "tell me som 2 conv. C46 Please don't finish it "That scar , I wasn't conscious when they-. " As if expec 2 conv. C47 Valen's voice filtered into the depths of Ryan's pleading body as his boots were 2 conv. C48 Is the use and failure of the pipe plausible Maybe it amounted to nothing-after 2 conv. C49 She nodded, biting her lip as she drew a quiet strength from deep within her abd 2 conv. C50 Do the metaphors add to the narrative without clouding it?: As Valen suctioned h 2 conv. C51 Is this well written ? His eyes burnt with the heat radiating through his vision 2 conv. C52 "No, because .... You're worth that kid's trust , her missing you everyday , thi 2 conv. C53 "Well, seeing as I'm here , and you still look as terrible as you did before-hit 2 conv. C54 As Valen suctioned his saliva around the cavity of a decaying tooth , draining t 2 conv. C55 Is this narrative inspiring.. should I aim to write like this author ? Cartridge 2 conv. C56 Is this well written: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes , he f 2 conv. C57 Ryan's complexion, draining of color, almost revealed a two-digit number. "Eleve 2 conv. C58 Please assess this passage : The crimson line seared across the horizon, suffoca 2 conv. C59 Is the point of view consistent? Victor glanced out across the field, the sizzli 2 conv. C60 As James opened his eyes, a melancholic gleam passed through them. He gazed down 2 conv. C61 Just then, his phone screamed to life and he unlocked it in panic "Max Hawthorne 2 conv. C62 Which version is clearer and more resonant: Elara's fingers grazed the warm skin 2 conv. C63 "That one was intense.." , Elara breathed into the space between them, , encircl 2 conv. C64 Dialogue Nah, nobody waiting for this sorry ass . Lost my family a while back , 2 conv. C65 "You know , we could just let them gain on us, and pretend we were dropped here. 2 conv. C66 Is this story gritty and compelling? Ryan's eyes remained closed as he listened 2 conv. C67 Does this revised piece have a good balance of adjectives and adverbs : It only 2 conv. C68 Is this realistic and not too romantic trope : I went through quite the ordeal , 2 conv. C69 Please highlight non dramatized dialogue that is effective: "Ah Ryan, you're a h 2 conv. C70 His eyes scanned the horizon in deportation, his spine wracked with shivers as h 2 conv. C71 Do they form a bond too fast or is it well paced? Ah Ryan, you're a good-lookin' 1 conv. C72 Which version is more resonant : one : As Liam integrated his eyes with the dire 1 conv. C73 Is this effective and well written: As Liam directed his eyes in the direction o 1 conv. C74 Liam , working tirelessly at the thick rope around Victors torso , mouthed a few 1 conv. C75 The hose scene is fessble ? Liam gave a measured response. "Well I can get throu 1 conv. C76 Is well written? "I'll hold you still , you only have to concentrate on breathin 1 conv. C77 Please write the rest of this scene :Liam ran a steady hand across Elena's navel 1 conv. C78 Please highlight the intense parts : She panted hard, letting herself finally gi 1 conv. C79 "Well you better keep that breathing steady for me , I can't stall this any long 1 conv. C80 Ryan's hazel aspect shone with flecks of illumination as he said "you never actu 1 conv. C81 She returned Liam's hand to continue the familiar build to the junction of pleas 1 conv. C82 "How, on earth, was the baby not detectable during her actual labor, there was o 1 conv. C83 Liam felt the bed rail shake with her hands as she collapsed against the side. " 1 conv. C84 Is this hug well written? Ryan pulled Liam into a hug that burned with regret , 1 conv. C85 A lingering testament to the sound of unease , the embodiment of reckless abando 1 conv. C86 In the dim light, Valen found a twisted kind of solace, toying with the cavity o 1 conv. C87 Which passage is of a profession calibre .. this one? In the dim light, Valen fo 1 conv. C88 It had been warm, yet pleasant , embalming them both in a magenta twilight. In t 1 conv. C89 Are there varied sentence openings? Ryan came into focus , and his bare feet cam 1 conv. C90 "Ryan is silent , is he not ? And somehow , he's been a bystander . Watching it 1 conv. C91 Here's a prompt to make my character have a drunk argument with a family member 1 conv. C92 As Ryan dragged his thighs through the shards of debris, the blood saturating hi 1 conv. C93 Which is more resonant , one or two : ONE : Ryan hauled his torso through the sp 1 conv. C94 Is the narrative complex: a duck went quack 1 conv. C95 H 1 conv. C96 His eyes burnt with the heat radiating through his vision , as he was forced int 1 conv. C97 Does this avoid melodrama and stick to realism? Here's a scene based on a prompt 1 conv. C98 " Morning , Lily , you must be wondering where Daddy went, or where Mommy is hid 1 conv. C99 "Valen, you know Liam is starting to piss me the hell off... well to be dramatic 1 conv. C100 Is it overwrought or precise in it's language use : Ryan hauled his torso throug 1 conv. C101 What are some interesting prompts for my characters, like situations I can plot 1 conv. C102 rate the sentence 1 conv. C103 Is there heartache depicted in this narrative: His eyes burnt with the heat radi 1 conv. C104 His acuity, melting into the atmosphere, left him with no other thoughts. 'You r 1 conv. C105 Here Valen taunts Liam with the possibility of having blinded Ryan .. isn't that 1 conv. C106 "Yeah they are-you've been in labour for 17 hours now, and you're doing such bea 1 conv. C107 Passage one "In the waning light, Liam's battle against the encroaching darkness 1 conv. C108 Does this passage exhibit maturity in writing ? Singer Here's an attempt at natu 1 conv. C109 Does this seem like a real conversation: "Well, seeing as , I'm here , and you s 1 conv. C110 Liam's breath , an unsteady exhale in the dark, dragged against his throat. The 1 conv. C111 Liam's eyes flickered with the discolouration of imploring deception as he said 1 conv. C112 Which is mis compelling 1 conv. C113 Cartridge What author would you compare this to direct or is it highly distincti 1 conv. C114 His aching skull, enraged with the pulse of rising nausea, intercepted with the 1 conv. C115 "Liam, just continue, can't have you both on the brink of -" There was a quiet b 1 conv. C116 Is this authors style gritty and impactful: Masonry Liam's hair, laden with spli 1 conv. C117 Which is most resort as an ending : Protector : Ryan came into focus , and his b 1 conv. C118 His rasping lullaby was eerie in the silence , and his heartbeat twisted as he h 1 conv. C119 Hi 1 conv. C120 Is this well written? Their footsteps fell in sync as Mason matched his strides 1 conv. C121 "With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that ca 1 conv. C122 Analyse the compellingness of my plot 1 conv. C123 V 1 conv. C124 Is this plausible? "Do you want someone to talk to about it? Or we could just si 1 conv. C125 Is this plausible : Ethan's knuckles dug further into the denim of his jeans , h 1 conv. C126 Snatching it up with a gleam in his eye, he reached out and caught her slim elbo 1 conv. C127 Ok an experiment : Victor , twirling his fork through a saturated noodle, suppre 1 conv. C128 "Yeah, that's what we don't have time for , Vic " he mumbled under his breath, w 1 conv. C129 sweat crawled in slivering , unwholesome trails of vessel breaking tears, bathin 1 conv. C130 Is the sentences beginnings stilted : Sweat crawled in slivering, unwholesome tr 1 conv. C131 Is this gratuitous and exploitative or well written? 1 conv. C132 Please highlight some effective dialogue within this passage : Holding Lily in h 1 conv. C133 . The strict , no external ,nor unsanitary objects placard , and stringent autoi 1 conv. C134 The air was biting, frost outlining her sighs of contentment as a doctor ruffled 1 conv. C135 After a nurse finally intervened, alleviating Max of his daughter and leaving hi 1 conv. C136 Analyse this sentence and the word choice : It only amounted to one, and it woul 1 conv. C137 What does "my levity is your jeopardy " mean 1 conv. C138 Which passage is more emotionally resonant? One: Ryan only held fragments of the 1 conv. C139 Liam's jaw clenched as he whispered "Please help me-", flinching as the sight of 1 conv. C140 Does the flash back make sense 1 conv. C141 Is the physicality explained well here: Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's ar 1 conv. C142 How can u word this better 1 conv. C143 Is there ryth 1 conv. C144 Is this gritty and effective? : They walked in shared disorientation, with Liam 1 conv. C145 Are these phrases gritty and effective.. please don't rewrite them : They walked 1 conv. C146 Is this gritty and effective As Liam writhed in the dying sunlight, his skin eru 1 conv. C147 I feel the vomiting needs to be mentioned as much as it does and can't be pared 1 conv. C148 Is this dialogue effective: The air was unrelenting in its suctioning nature, st 1 conv. C149 Is this effective and are the characters three dimensional? It only amounted to 1 conv. C150 as the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt an imperceptible gl 1 conv. C151 Which ending is more emotionally resonant one or two 1 conv. C152 Is this gritty and real or too flowery : Ryan came into focus , and his bare fee 1 conv. C153 Is the dialogue natural? 1 conv. C154 Is this well worded : Liam , screaming through his gag, purged the contraband an 1 conv. C155 Is this substantial enough for an adult audience: It was a whimper , and Liam st 1 conv. C156 Are the names Liam and Ryan good for two best friends in a thriller story 1 conv. C157 Is this written at high skill level or a low skill level? Help me--No. No," he p 1 conv. C158 Is this unprofessional because of overuse of description? The present The air wa 1 conv. C159 The air was unrelenting, stripping the moisture from their skin as they navigate 1 conv. C160 Have I employed implication and subtext effectively: Ryan rested his hand upon L 1 conv. C161 Is this advanced and of professional calibre? But the voice persisted, causing L 1 conv. C162 Does this flow well, don't revise: "As they walked in disorientation, Liam was m 1 conv. C163 : In the twilight haze, Ethans' eyes flew open , the saccharine , psychotropic c 1 conv. C164 Which version is better written One :"Oh, God, I threw up the contraband--those 1 conv. C165 Is this sentence effective, don't rephrase: "Hell yeah , you don't " Liam's smat 1 conv. C166 Are these phrases effective? "Liam, I don't know that I'm above crawling in ther 1 conv. C167 G 1 conv. C168 Please break my passage into paragraphs like yours but don't rephrase 1 conv. C169 Please comment and the naturalism of the dialogue: Leaning into her touch as her 1 conv. C170 Leaning into her touch as her fingers moved to the tender spot between his earlo 1 conv. C171 Is this scene effective..explain why :Ah Ryan, you're handsome sure, from the co 1 conv. C172 Quite natural and effective moments rm Availability) If this app doesn't respond 1 conv. C173 Good balance of realism and whimsy? Ah Ryan, you're handsome sure, from the coll 1 conv. C174 I want to share two passages for comparison in tone and to see if they fit toget 1 conv. C175 Please write a quick letter to my nephrologist explaining that I want to quit di 1 conv. C176 Is this raw and real Singer Here's an attempt at natural dialogue surrounding gr 1 conv. C177 (empty) 1 conv. C178 (empty) 1 conv. C179 (empty) 1 conv. C180 (empty) 1 conv. C181 (empty) 1 conv.