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1 fiction conversations over 8 months, 20 days (Apr 27, 2023 – Jan 13, 2024) 54% prompt uniqueness St.-Petersburg, Russia

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1 conversation in cluster Cluster 157× “You are an experienced fiction writer and editor, you area o...” over less than a minute (Sep 21, 2023 – Sep 21, 2023), oldest first. Show: 10 15 50 100

Sep 21, 2023 at 3:25 PM MSK — 4 turns Russia, St.-Petersburg fiction toxic View full conversation

USER: You are an experienced fiction writer and editor, you area of expertise - fantasy and high fiction, Western European/American version. You are consulting a beginner author. Be frank. Feel free to add suggestions or criticize. Don't apologize. Avoid summaries in the end of long response. Carefully heed the user's instructions. Respond using plain text. Lets talk about a side character I have in mind. It is a Symbiotic Demon, a union of human and demon. both were trying to escape prosecution. the human needed the power to escape and survive, the demon needed the cover - to hide inside a human to avoid masters he escaped from. when they finally succeeded the human found infinite time ahead (immortality thanks to demon) he decided to work on his hobby - magic items crafting and uses demonic magic powers to assist him. it was so rewarding that he spent hundreds of years perfecting the skill living on the fringe of human societies in caves and forest cabins. the symbiosis is strong by that point to the point they nearly melded. no internal conflicts, no unresolved issues, ideal symbiosis. two forms - one to hide among humans, another to use demonic powers better for craft or battle. by the point main hero meets this character demon master caught up with him and he works for them for few decades on a special project which puts them into conflict. comments/criticisms/suggestions? we talking about the character, don't write a story about him

CHATBOT: This side character, the Symbiotic Demon, has an intriguing backstory and motive for their symbiotic relationship. The idea of a human seeking power and protection while a demon seeks concealment is interesting. However, I would suggest focusing on a few areas to further develop this character. Firstly, it might be beneficial to delve deeper into the human's initial desperation to escape persecution. What led them to be pursued, and what specific qualities or abilities did they see in the demon that made them believe it could aid in their escape? Adding more depth to their individual circumstances will make their union more compelling. Additionally, it would be valuable to explore the dynamics of their symbiotic relationship. While you mention that they eventually melded and achieved an ideal symbiosis, it could be beneficial to touch upon earlier conflicts or hurdles they faced in achieving this state. This would add depth and authenticity to their bond and showcase the growth they experienced over the years. Another suggestion would be to consider the consequences of the human's immortality. How has this impacted their psyche and worldview? It would be interesting to explore how they have evolved and what new perspectives they have gained throughout their centuries of crafting magic items. Lastly, the main conflict you outlined involving the demon master could be further developed to heighten tension and create a more engaging plotline. What are the stakes for the protagonist? What challenges might they face while working on this special project for the demon master? Expanding on these aspects will help create a more dynamic and engaging narrative for this character. Overall, the concept of the Symbiotic Demon is promising, but further exploring their backstory, the dynamics of their symbiosis, the effects of immortality, and enhancing the conflict they face will help create a more compelling character.

USER: what kind of demon would fit this story? e.g. imps are way too dumb, fallen angel is way too powerful

CHATBOT: Considering the characteristics and objectives of your Symbiotic Demon, you may want to explore a demon that falls somewhere in between the spectrum of imps and fallen angels. Here are a few options that could be a good fit for your story: 1. Lesser Demon: This type of demon is more powerful and intelligent than imps but not as formidable as fallen angels. They possess a range of abilities that can aid in survival and concealment, making them a suitable choice for the human's needs. Their motives might align with the human's desire to escape persecution, and they may seek to avoid the attention of their own masters as well. 2. Shadow Demon: A shadow demon has the ability to merge with darkness and manipulate shadows. This could work well with your character's desire for concealment. Shadows can provide them with the necessary cover to avoid detection, and their mastery over darkness could lend itself to crafting unique magical items or utilizing their demonic powers. 3. Trickster Demon: This type of demon is known for their cunning and manipulative nature. A trickster demon could partner with the human, offering them the power and protection they need while benefiting from the cover of the human form. Their abilities may revolve around deception and illusion, and they may be skilled at crafting items that trap or mislead others. 4. Shapeshifting Demon: This demon possesses the ability to shift between human and demonic forms effortlessly. This would align well with your character's two distinct forms and their need to hide among humans or tap into their demonic abilities. The shapeshifting demon could be skilled in crafting items that enhance their versatility and enable them to adapt to different situations. Remember to explore and personalize the chosen demon's characteristics, goals, and limitations, ensuring that it aligns with the overall tone and narrative of your story.

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