USER: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that captured the essence of summer. His tanned complexion shone in the daylight, and the waves lapped at his bare ankles while he stood amidst the breeze. His lips, chapped and coated with the salt of the ocean air, seemed irresistible. Reaching out gingerly, she traced her finger along the outline of his youthful grin, leaned in closer, and gazed deep into his mischievous stare. With her other hand, she ran her fingers across the tender spot where his skin met his earlobe, and swept her tongue along his bottom lip. His heated gasp filled her ear, sending a jolt to her core as she entwined her fingers in his tousled , sun-bleached hair. Grasping his scalp she pulled him closer , deepening their kiss as he hovered his palm at the small of her back. He bit at her collarbone , dragging his teeth roughly across her bare skin, and whispered "Good morning to you , too." With a laugh , she pushed his chest with open palms, and he staggered backwards, dragging her with him as they fell into the shallows, their legs intermingled. "I was awake all night imagining this" she teased, gliding her hands up his abs and pushing him down into the cool water , the friction of sand grazing his flesh under her touch. She trailed her tongue across his pec, leaving an exhilarating path of sensations in her wake, causing him to groan, repositioning her in his lap. As her hands reached the hollow of his neck she whispered , spla...

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USER: Please don't change the wording or my unique voice, just correct the grammar: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that captured the essence of summer. His tanned complexion shone in the daylight, and the waves lapped at his bare ankles while he stood amidst the breeze. His lips, chapped and coated with the salt of the ocean air, seemed irresistible. Reaching out gingerly, she traced her finger along the outline of his youthful grin, leaned in closer, and gazed deep into his mischievous stare. With her other hand, she ran her fingers across the tender spot where his skin met his earlobe, and swept her tongue along his bottom lip. His heated gasp filled her ear, sending a jolt to her core as she entwined her fingers in his tousled , sun-bleached hair. Grasping his scalp she pulled him closer , deepening their kiss as he hovered his palm at the small of her back. He bit at her collarbone , dragging his teeth roughly across her bare skin, and whispered "Good morning to you , too." With a laugh , she pushed his chest with open palms, and he staggered backwards, dragging her with him as they fell into the shallows, their legs intermingled. "I was awake all night imagining this" she teased, gliding her hands up his abs and pushing him down into the cool water , the friction of sand grazing his flesh under her touch. She trailed her tongue across his pec, leaving an exhilarating path of sensations in her wake, causing him to groan, repositioning her in his lap. As her hands reached the hollow of his neck she whispered , splashing ice cold water across his lips. "Did you miss me?" . A hoarse gasp replied for him , the intoxication that coursed through his veins stealing his breath. "Not as much as I need you. Now. "He mumbled against her neck with urgency . His scent filled her lungs, a mixture of surfboard wax and generic soap , she held him in her chest for a moment, comforted by the familiar smell. The waves lapsed coolly at the hotness pooling between his legs as he fought to hold himself back, his pupils widened with arousal. Memories of the previous night raced through her mind as she brushed her hands along the waistband of his board shorts, playing idly with the knot, untying it with a slow pace. "How badly do you need me ?" She asked, her voice laced with a tone that sent shivers cascading down his spine , as his hips rose instinctively toward her hand. Her hands grasped his thigh for leverage as she looped the cord of his shorts between her fingers, teasing the hairline between his hips . His groan of frustration elicited a smile of euphoria from her lips as he growled "Come here". As she inched closer , she brushed her hand over his growing arousal, a thrum of ecstasy washing through her senses as his nostrils flared in response to her touch. "Last night, when I left , did you ever dream I'd return?" she teased as her hands traced patterns into his hipbones and his head dipped back below his shoulders in surrender. "Oh God " he breathed into the balmy twilight air. Leaning forward, he ran his hand through her dark strands of hair, combing them away from her vibrant blue eyes with calloused fingers, and pulling her pelvis down into his lap. The biting water stung at his desire, cooling the heat just long enough for him to catch his ragged breath. "I was hoping you'd be back, Cutie" he said, his lopsided grin matching the gleam in his stare , as she outlined his smattering of freckles with one finger, and slipped her other hand below the hem of his shorts. His chin rested on her exposed clavicle as he slowed his breath, coming faster as she slid further down . Her grasp, firm and deliberate, sent a surge of ecstasy to his groin, as she caressed his aching arousal. Eliciting a shuddering breath from his clenched teeth as he writhed in her hands she whispered "Not yet..." and withdrew her touch. The pace of his breathing sped up as she skirted the edge of his arousal , freezing his movements in the glow of the moonlight,darkening sky , as the sun sank out of sight. Then as she climbed out of his lap, leaving him submerged in the waves , she turned , whispering in the encroaching moonlight. "I have to go." His pulse screamingscreamed to a halt, he rasped after her, grabbing her hand. "Where? Why? And ...again, just like last night..."night. You even told me this was what you wanted. I believed you, it it not true? ..." His eyes searched hers with confusion and genuine defeat , saying nothing as he relinquished his grip on her wrist . Her eyes held a glimmer of remorse , and she waded out of the water, evading his hand as it fell away and hit the water with a dejected splash. "I'll be back , before morning, please wait for me." Her words hung in the air, shattering his smile. As his body slid under the surface of the water , he gazed up at the sky in disillusionment. "You won't be back.."back..." She left in silence , and only glanced over her shoulder once, as she left him behind yet again, torn with guilt and shame. Maybe it was a mistake , he wouldn't wait. He'd be gone by daylight .