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1 fiction conversations over 1 month, 9 days (Jan 27, 2024 – Mar 7, 2024) 27% prompt uniqueness Queensland, Australia
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C0 Has the author achieved something challenging? Victor glanced out across the fie 36 conv. C1 What about this piece : It only amounted to one, and it would always , in his ch 27 conv. C2 Elara's fingers grazed the warm skin below Max's wrist as she searched for his a 18 conv. C3 She was standing by the waterfront, the hospital safely in the background as she 11 conv. C4 Holding her closer to his pulse, Max stood against the metallic wall of the NICU 5 conv. C5 Is this a realistic piece? Mason sighed in frustration, balling another pair of 4 conv. C6 Is this well written: With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes , he f 3 conv. C7 The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital could generate, other i 3 conv. C8 With flecks of gold scattered across his green eyes, he flashed a smile that cap 2 conv. C9 sweat crawled in slivering , unwholesome trails of vessel breaking tears, bathin 2 conv. C10 Just then, his phone screamed to life and he unlocked it in panic "Max Hawthorne 2 conv. C11 as the road stretched bare and cold ahead of them, Liam felt an imperceptible gl 2 conv. C12 Hi 1 conv. C13 Is this well written? Their footsteps fell in sync as Mason matched his strides 1 conv. C14 Is this professional: It only amounted to one, and it would always--in his fatig × 1 conv. C15 Analyse the compellingness of my plot 1 conv. C16 V 1 conv. C17 Is this plausible? "Do you want someone to talk to about it? Or we could just si 1 conv. C18 Snatching it up with a gleam in his eye, he reached out and caught her slim elbo 1 conv. C19 Ok an experiment : Victor , twirling his fork through a saturated noodle, suppre 1 conv. C20 Is this gratuitous and exploitative or well written? 1 conv. C21 Please highlight some effective dialogue within this passage : Holding Lily in h 1 conv. C22 . The strict , no external ,nor unsanitary objects placard , and stringent autoi 1 conv. C23 The air was biting, frost outlining her sighs of contentment as a doctor ruffled 1 conv. C24 Here's the passage with the additional text broken into paragraphs: "That's it, 1 conv. C25 Is this overwrought: The disquiet of the three am bustle that only a hospital co 1 conv. C26 Is the emotion too spelt out ? As the searing pain began to swell in Elara's tau 1 conv. C27 Analyse this sentence and the word choice : It only amounted to one, and it woul 1 conv. C28 What does "my levity is your jeopardy " mean 1 conv. C29 Is the physicality explained well here: Liam, reaching up and gripping Ryan's ar 1 conv. C30 How can u word this better 1 conv. C31 Is there ryth 1 conv. C32 Is this gritty and effective? : They walked in shared disorientation, with Liam 1 conv. C33 Are these phrases gritty and effective.. please don't rewrite them : They walked 1 conv. C34 Which ending is more emotionally resonant one or two 1 conv. C35 The roads were dead, lifeless , without a pulse as Ryan watched Liam's broken fi 1 conv. C36 Is this substantial enough for an adult audience: It was a whimper , and Liam st 1 conv. C37 Please write a quick letter to my nephrologist explaining that I want to quit di 1 conv. C38 (empty) 1 conv.
1 conversation in cluster Cluster 14× “Is this professional: It only amounted to one, and it would ...” over less than a minute (Jan 30, 2024 – Jan 30, 2024), oldest first. Show: 10 15 50 100
Jan 30, 2024 at 11:00 AM AEDT — 30 turns Australia, Queensland fiction toxic View full conversation
USER: Is this professional: It only amounted to one, and it would always--in his fatigue-soaked corneas, grief fed on his psyche. Suddenly, he was overcome by a violent heave, a primal urge rising in his liver. Bile stained his teeth, and the following retches were acidic, lashing the roof of his mouth with fury. It could never stop: his body rejected the substance over and over; he was hanging by a thread of sanity. "Not again. Please no-" Liam clenched his teeth, the crucial moment upon him; he had to keep the substance down, or the consequences would be dire. His eyes scanned the horizon with desperation before his lids slid closed, and he was wracked with shivers of resistance. Then, as the urge to be sick overcame him, a voice pierced through his fog of despair, a lifeline amidst his struggle. "Can you hear me?" the rough, concerned tone asked as Liam writhed against the concrete, groaning in agony. "Don't try to answer that, just blink twice. Take it slow." As he fought to drag his eyelids upward, the pain, like a coiling wire, constricted his blood flow in brutal retaliation. "Make it stop-No I mustn't lose it," he choked. It he expelled the violating drug from his intestines, his efforts to amount to zero. Square one. In horror, the rising of the illicit substance wasn't unlike a negative battery melting into a metal cylinder as his throat tightened. He was at the end of a long night,
CHATBOT: The text appears to be a creative and descriptive narrative, possibly the excerpt of a story or novel, detailing a character's intense, visceral struggle with what seems to be a physical reaction to a substance, potentially a drug. From a professional writing standpoint, the passage is certainly crafted with a vivid and powerful use of language to evoke the character's suffering and internal battle. However, when you ask if this is 'professional,' it depends on the context in which the term is used: 1. If you are referring to the writing style and quality, then yes, the passage is professionally written in terms of narrative voice, imagery, and emotional depth. 2. If you mean 'professional' in the sense of appropriate for all types of professional communication, then no, it's not suitable for, say, a formal business letter or an academic report, as it is very specific to creative writing styles meant for fiction and storytelling. 3. In terms of content, it's a professional piece if it's intended for an audience that expects and appreciates this type of emotionally heavy, descriptive narrative, such as readers of literary fiction or dark, intense drama. The passage is engaging and well-crafted for its likely purpose, but it is not what one typically includes in many professional contexts outside of creative or entertainment industries.
USER: It's fiction
CHATBOT: Understood. As a piece of fiction, the passage demonstrates professional qualities in terms of its vivid imagery, compelling narrative, and the depth of character exploration. Whether it's part of a larger work such as a novel, a short story, or another form of creative writing, it successfully engages the reader with a detailed description of the character's physical and emotional turmoil. In the context of fiction writing, 'professional' often refers to the skillful use of language, originality, characterization, and how effectively the piece holds the reader's attention or evokes emotion. This excerpt shows proficiency in these areas and would be considered a professional level of writing within the creative writing field.